Reading Notes: Crossing the River
Reading Notes for Crossing the River by PDE Ramayana The image above displays the life these people lived "On the River" and within the trees and other greenery. -Why are they in exile? -They all seem to be very sad to be leaving their home -Will everything go back to normal after the 14 years? -Are all of these people brothers? -They are comforting one another because they are far from home. -No one seems very happy about this. -Everyone seems to be helping them even though they are being sent into exile. -In the end they say that they can no longer live life like this, but they just resort to comforting one another. -I wonder if they will enjoy their time or if they will long to be home and have quarrels among them -I would like to rewrite this so that I could give more detail and life to these characters and thicken both the plot and storyline.